Tuesday, August 17, 2010

The List

by James

eggs
milk
steak and pies
chicken

milo
chocolate
coffee beans
tea and toffee

pizza!
ice cream!
primo!
and more chocolate!

aeroplane models!
toys, toys!
and more toys!

Ha! You little rascals
don't play with
my shopping list!

Posted by Parkvale 18
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8 comments:

  1. AnonymousAugust 18, 2010 at 12:02 PM

    hi james love the ending of your poem!
    from your friend emily

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  2. AnonymousAugust 18, 2010 at 12:10 PM

    I like how you changed your poem to those cool stuff and I like how you worked really hard. Keep up the good work, James.Suitte

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  3. AnonymousAugust 18, 2010 at 12:56 PM

    I like your initiative in your words and your key words as well James. Harry

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  4. AnonymousSeptember 20, 2010 at 2:13 PM

    Hi james I like the poem that you did and all the food yoa put in.It makes me hungry.From Whare

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  5. Room 13September 20, 2010 at 2:16 PM

    I think this poem is really cool and the best bit was the end.
    by Kiri.

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  6. Room 13September 20, 2010 at 2:35 PM

    Thats a great poem. I realy liked the end emily. Keep up the great work. from Ashleigh M

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  7. Room 13September 20, 2010 at 2:36 PM

    I liked the ending and the key words as well james.from Paige.

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  8. AnonymousAugust 3, 2011 at 12:03 PM

    awesome poem James guess what i'm doing when i get home ha ha ha!!!!!

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