Friday, September 10, 2010

Happiness vs. Anger


HAPPINESS

I am a curving ball flying through the air.

I am a lion fighting for the pride.

I am a star shining in the sky.

I am the boy whose birthday is at Dream World.

ANGER

I am a mustard can lying on the asphalt.

I am a superfluous dog bursting with rage.

I am a bat lying on the dusty ground.

I am the boy who has gone to the principal.
Posted by Parkvale 18
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2 comments:

  1. AnonymousSeptember 18, 2010 at 4:19 PM

    I like your poem because, your metaphor was really good. It's like you're really the metaphor. You used good words in your poem. Keep up the good work, Jackson! From Suitte

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  2. AnonymousNovember 16, 2010 at 8:39 AM

    Thats AMAZING poetry Jackson!!
    I like the sentence I am A mustard can lying on a ashphelt.
    Do you read heaps of poetry?
    Well done!!!
    Shannon

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