Tuesday, November 9, 2010

The Big Ramp




There I was waiting for my turn then suddenly it was my turn.


I zoomed down the big ramp and jumped in mid air


Splat! I landed in the foam pit.


I quickly jumped out of the foam pit with my scooter and scooted away.


"Hi Jesse," I said. Have you been on the big ramp yet?"


"No I'm not a pro bro" said Jesse. "Do you want a race Gabriel?"


"All right on your marks get set go!"


Me and Jesse zoomed all over the place. "I'm the winner! I'm the winner!" I said.


1st Gabriel winner


2nd Jesse loser




By Gabriel

2 comments:

  1. You look like a pro on that scooter Gabriel!!!

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  2. wow neat writing!!!!
    from Greer and Hollie

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