Letter to Breanna in 10 years time

This is my letter to me in 10 years time.

I have stuck on bits and bobs on my letter to make it look like it is in a newsletter.

I would love any comments about my letter.

I have drawn some pictures on it to show the wow factor illustrations and personality.

These were my assesments...

Emotion-please please please dont get too fat

personality-peace out/

colour-peace out/

letter structure-dear Breanna

I really love my letter.

It is probably the best piece of writing I had ever made !!!

By Breanna.

Letter To Me

For emotion I did two ticks. My example is 'p.s don't forget to have fun with your life. For personality four ticks. My example is 'I love chocolate. For colour I did four tick. MY example is' I loove chocolate. For letter structure I did :). My example is ' Hi it's me Raiha. And for my next step : put more emotion in my story.

I was pleased with my presentation because... My illustration was good and BOLD. I want to get better at is... Putting more personality in my story and pictures.