Saturday, July 10, 2010

My Leaf



My leaf is red and crinkly. It is very old and mouldy but really nice and smooth. It looks like it's been attacked by a very bad storm. Its skin feels so smooth just like an eel. It looks like it's been badly burnt but smells like daffodils.


My leaf is beautiful and strong. My leaf is crunchy and hard. It has little mouldy black spots on it. My leaf is a little bit muddy because of all of its muddy surroundings. I think it has a nice rich colour in it.


My leaf is a good leaf - it doesn't twirl around the room or runaway from me. When I let my leaf go, it doesn't want to go. My leaf dreams of gliding through the air like an aeroplane. My leaf is quiet and not very loud!


And that is what I like about my leaf.



By Ayaan J

3 comments:

  1. I like your choice of words and sentences.Emma

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  2. WOW!,I am amazed how brilliant you write.Ashley

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  3. WOW!!!,wonderful work Ayaan, this is AWESOME!Abdi.

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