Saturday, June 4, 2011

The Deer



We were running from the pipe line to the ginormous dirt hill. We were playing on the dirt hill running up and down. I sprinted down the hill. Suddenly I felt something beneath my feet. Holy cheese balls!!!
I nearly tripped over, I looked down at my feet then I saw it- the hooves and stomach of a deer. The smell was horrendous! It smelt like the girls' showers because I could smell that from 1 million miles away but it also smelt like the boys' toilet. I walked away trying not to breathe.

By Keenan

3 comments:

  1. That must of been really gross!!

    from Christian

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  2. What a great piece of writing Keenan I love the word Horrendous.
    Shannnon

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  3. i love my own work
    from keenan

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