We were running from the pipe line to the ginormous dirt hill. We were playing on the dirt hill running up and down. I sprinted down the hill. Suddenly I felt something beneath my feet. Holy cheese balls!!!
I nearly tripped over, I looked down at my feet then I saw it- the hooves and stomach of a deer. The smell was horrendous! It smelt like the girls' showers because I could smell that from 1 million miles away but it also smelt like the boys' toilet. I walked away trying not to breathe.
By Keenan
That must of been really gross!!
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What a great piece of writing Keenan I love the word Horrendous.
ReplyDeleteShannnon
i love my own work
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