Monday, October 17, 2011

The S Fraction Poem


S is a third of the sun in the sky
S is a quarter of slam
S is a fifth of a stoat on the ground in the Bahamas of land
S is a sixth of Saturn in the sky
S is 0.4 soaps in the bathtub
S is amazing!!!
S also has a seventh of a mystery finding the blue diamond of Sonya Sweet
S has a tenth of a conclusion in a hectors dolphin report

S has a courtesy in the politeness of words
S is truly amazing !!!

                                            by Breanna

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10 comments:

  1. AnonymousOctober 18, 2011 at 6:15 PM

    well done Breanna.
    I thought your...
    S poem was cool.
    Shannon

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  2. amberOctober 26, 2011 at 11:43 AM

    awesome B I love your sentences.
    s is truly awesome

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  3. DaynaOctober 26, 2011 at 11:45 AM

    well done at the ending

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  4. DaynaOctober 26, 2011 at 11:46 AM

    well done at the ending

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  5. breannaOctober 26, 2011 at 11:47 AM

    wow breanna you are great at writing poems expecally the s poem love it great to see your posts up on the blog again
    breanna

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  6. BenOctober 26, 2011 at 11:48 AM

    I like how you have added in things that we have been doing this year like "Madam Spry, Space and our Reports

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  7. DaynaOctober 26, 2011 at 11:48 AM

    well done breaana. at the end

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  8. TylerOctober 26, 2011 at 11:49 AM

    COOL!!! poem Breanna. I like how you put the words into funny sentences my favourite was "S is 0.4 soaps in the bathtub" it was very creative.

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  9. breannas mumOctober 28, 2011 at 4:40 PM

    Wow Breanna! Very impressed with your "S" poem. Good work!

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  10. breannas dadOctober 28, 2011 at 4:42 PM

    Very clever Bree! I like your style with an "S"!

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