Congratulations to Jesse who won the nationwide Hanable the Canable writing competition against over 300 entries and won Room 18 Parkvale School an iPad! There were actually three entries from Room 18 to make the finalists! Here is the link to Jesse's winning entry: HC by Jesse. Below is Jesse's long awaited sequel to his HC story!
HANABLE THE CANABLE continued...
AN UNEXPECTED FOE
BY JESSE
"SMASH!" HC crashed into the hot concrete, face on fire with embarrassment. A colossal litterbot had erupted from a secret door within the pathway and overwhelmed the two heroes with a blast from his nuclear powered cannon. "Distract him while I take him from behind!" Agent Environment yelled trying to dodge the capsules flying past him. HC nodded quietly as if shocked from the pain going through his 'body'. "ZOOM!" Agent Environment flew around the robot and on to his back, as HC started his hurricane diversion. Distressed by all the confusing events, without Agent Environment having to do anything, the litterbot crashed lazily to the ground! "Wow! That was a mission or two!" panted HC, "Anyway, onwards to Unable's lair!!!
"SMASH!" HC crashed into the hot concrete, face on fire with embarrassment. A colossal litterbot had erupted from a secret door within the pathway and overwhelmed the two heroes with a blast from his nuclear powered cannon. "Distract him while I take him from behind!" Agent Environment yelled trying to dodge the capsules flying past him. HC nodded quietly as if shocked from the pain going through his 'body'. "ZOOM!" Agent Environment flew around the robot and on to his back, as HC started his hurricane diversion. Distressed by all the confusing events, without Agent Environment having to do anything, the litterbot crashed lazily to the ground! "Wow! That was a mission or two!" panted HC, "Anyway, onwards to Unable's lair!!!
02036, HANNABLE THE UNABLES LAIR, fort pollute
"So…this is the villains' safe house aye?" HC said, studying the beautiful golden doors with admiration and disgust all in one. Giant clouds of smoke rose from the chimneys which towered above; rubbish lay all around, the colour of the sky was pretty much just black, and all of this just for Unable's wealth. This was not acceptable! HC was ready to rumble! The two blasted the door open to find humming voices among a huddle of villains and the one that stood out the most…Hannable the Unable! "Ahhhhh, brother you decided to visit…come, sit with my friends and I, let us discuss our plans together," Unable said with a smirk.
"Yeah…right…as if I'd do that…You're so dim-witted sometimes."
A number of gasps erupted from the crowd. "Do you want to just say that one more time?"
"You're…so…DIM-WITTED."
"THAT'S IT! No more Mister nice guy! GET HIM!"
And from there a tremendous battle broke out between the two sides, flashes in many different colours went throughout the room like birds taking flight. Until after a while… "STOP THE FIGHT!!!!!!!!!!!!" HC panted with frustration, "This is a matter to discuss!"
"As much as you say so, I'm not going to change what I'm going to do! How much is it going to take to get that into your head?" Unable shouted, anger written all over his face.
"Look, if you just listen to what I'm trying to say, and then I'll leave!"
"Arrrgh, fine but make it quick!"
"Thank you…so, it's about time you thought about time you started thinking about what you've been doing…Have you not noticed that if you carry on the way your going, all you'll be known as is a selfish pig who doesn't care about anything, or anyone but himself. Everything that you're doing and that you've done has absolutely scarred the earth. If you want to make the earth's life span shorter than it's up to you but I say stop NOW!"
There was a moment of silence. "Now, I guess I should be going!" HC said with a deep breath.
"Wait!!!" Unable yelled, "I just want to say, thank you…I've never really thought of it that way…So I guess I'll just stop,"
"Guess you should!"
"Yeah…right…as if I'd do that…You're so dim-witted sometimes."
A number of gasps erupted from the crowd. "Do you want to just say that one more time?"
"You're…so…DIM-WITTED."
"THAT'S IT! No more Mister nice guy! GET HIM!"
And from there a tremendous battle broke out between the two sides, flashes in many different colours went throughout the room like birds taking flight. Until after a while… "STOP THE FIGHT!!!!!!!!!!!!" HC panted with frustration, "This is a matter to discuss!"
"As much as you say so, I'm not going to change what I'm going to do! How much is it going to take to get that into your head?" Unable shouted, anger written all over his face.
"Look, if you just listen to what I'm trying to say, and then I'll leave!"
"Arrrgh, fine but make it quick!"
"Thank you…so, it's about time you thought about time you started thinking about what you've been doing…Have you not noticed that if you carry on the way your going, all you'll be known as is a selfish pig who doesn't care about anything, or anyone but himself. Everything that you're doing and that you've done has absolutely scarred the earth. If you want to make the earth's life span shorter than it's up to you but I say stop NOW!"
There was a moment of silence. "Now, I guess I should be going!" HC said with a deep breath.
"Wait!!!" Unable yelled, "I just want to say, thank you…I've never really thought of it that way…So I guess I'll just stop,"
"Guess you should!"
MISSION ACCOMPLISHED
wOW jesse YOU ARE LIKE FAMOUS i CAN'T BELIVE THAT YOU WON AN IPAD FOR THE CLASS I WISH YOU WERE HERE TO HERE THIS OH WELL I WISH YOU COULD HAVE IT.
ReplyDeleteshannon
P.S Have a great time at intermediet.
awww, I'm starting to miss you guys already!i'm in aussie at the moment and have been reflecting on the awesome times we had this year by visiting the rm 18 blog. i hope to see you all sometime round. i encourage all of you to reach great heights next year,
ReplyDeletethanks shannon!
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